I enjoyed reading through the different character trails on this map. It was pretty cool that your story references so many different landmarks in New York City even though it takes place in the future. The idea of having the sectors is sweet too (almost reminds me of how District 9 or the Hunger Games was set up). I'm interested to see how the story plays out! Keep up the good work!
I really like this map!! Every place mark seems really important to your character's story yet you kept it really exciting and different from place mark to place mark. I think it would be really difficult to come up with new pieces to the puzzle of finding the missing girl, but you guys did a really good job by keeping the story exciting for readers.
I really liked how descriptive and informative Madeline's character trail was. The reader gets a real sense of everything that is going on in each of her locations, and the significance that has on her character. I also liked that your story goes outside of Morgantown, and incorporates important locations into the story lines of the characters. The plot of the narrative is super interesting, so you did a good job keeping the post interesting and applicable to the plot as well! good job!
I enjoyed reading through the different character trails on this map. It was pretty cool that your story references so many different landmarks in New York City even though it takes place in the future. The idea of having the sectors is sweet too (almost reminds me of how District 9 or the Hunger Games was set up). I'm interested to see how the story plays out! Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteI really like this map!! Every place mark seems really important to your character's story yet you kept it really exciting and different from place mark to place mark. I think it would be really difficult to come up with new pieces to the puzzle of finding the missing girl, but you guys did a really good job by keeping the story exciting for readers.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how descriptive and informative Madeline's character trail was. The reader gets a real sense of everything that is going on in each of her locations, and the significance that has on her character. I also liked that your story goes outside of Morgantown, and incorporates important locations into the story lines of the characters. The plot of the narrative is super interesting, so you did a good job keeping the post interesting and applicable to the plot as well! good job!
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